This was a great new rendition of a classic with a surprising ending. The wolf let his 'cloak' fall away and left...I have to think about this some more. The evil intent that was softened. You are my 260th bedtime story.
If I may venture a constructive comment; I dislike the fact that the way Substack is built, I see the moral of the story before I even click and start to read it.
This was a great new rendition of a classic with a surprising ending. The wolf let his 'cloak' fall away and left...I have to think about this some more. The evil intent that was softened. You are my 260th bedtime story.
I really enjoyed reading this and style of writing!
Humbled!
As I said, I like this idea, this concept a lot.
If I may venture a constructive comment; I dislike the fact that the way Substack is built, I see the moral of the story before I even click and start to read it.
Love the feedback. Love any feedback, because it’s a point of mind expansion. In this case:
The moral of the story shows there as a reminder of the original fable.
By the end of the story we are left with an alternative ending, in this way fulfilling the premise of these writings